Post by Zhiel on Aug 14, 2009 17:57:55 GMT -4
I'm sorry for the ridiculously late reply, but if you do come back and see this message and want to continue here, then you can PM me and I will get right on reviewing it. Though I would advice lenghtening the physical description, maybe elaborating a little on the personality but most of all increase the length and detail of the history. They are all questionable length for a fourth seat. I won't review abilities or actual content until I know incase you will continue on the site however.
