Post by Sieru on Jun 27, 2010 7:47:15 GMT -4
Shinigami
Name: Sieru (no sur name)
Gender: Male
Age: 15 (appearing, 156 otherwise)
Division: 5th (As division 5 seems to be lacking in members, aside from the Lieuteant {or Vice Captain} I would like to have this applied to a higher seat if possible.
Rank:
Physical Description:
aereno.deviantart.com/art/Sieru-162660067?q=1&qo=1
Pale skin lines his thin face, grey eyes watching from beneath the brown bangs that are cut short, and a bit unevenly above them. He looks as if he could probably use a beach and pair of swim trunks for a tan. His grey eyes are almost always set withing a glare, usually looking, without deviation, to the horizon before him, rather than around at the useless and meaningless decoratory, or activities about him. His lightly coloured brown hair is cut short, and sticks up at odd places, despite its clean appearance. Cut in a Layered style, if there is a style to it, its 2 or 3 inches long at the very longest. He has a small bone-set, and from head to toe, is abou 5'5" in height.
Sieru's outfit is similar to most other shinigami's uniforms aside from a few things. The black of the uniform was a small blue-ish tint to it, much like a raven can have a green or purple tint to their feathers. The differences in his uniform, and a regular one are as follows. THere isn't an opening in the front, being a regular shirt, rather than a wrap around kimono style, like most. On his upper arms are slits, revealing that he wears a fish-net shirt beneath it. Hidden from view, Sieru wears a strong armour on his shoulders, protecting his neck, collar bone, and upper-chest area, as well as making it appear as if he has wider shoulders than he does. He wears his zanpakutoh *See zanpakutoh section for description*) at his side, hanging up to down, besides front to back.
Personality:
A lazy, and drawn back personality, that contradicts his habits. He'd rather sit and wait out the storm, rather than rush and try to make it end. Being lazy and drawn back, he sits in the back of classes, or meeting halls, seemingly unpaying attention, as he freely stared around different areas, watching and waiting. However, his habits seem to contradict this, as he rushes from place to place, hardly ever staying more than a few days at the same place, refusing to wait any longer. However, his paths are linear. He stays a few days and point A, then goes to B, then C, Then D, then back to A, and continues in the same pattern, until an outside force influences his paths.
When Reacting with others, he tends to be short and curt, not saying any more than he usually needs to, preferring to be alone, and will often stroll on past someone in moderate trouble. However, once again, his habits contradict his personality. If an ally or friend, or just merely someone he's taken moderate interest in, he'll jump on the grenade to save their life, so to speak, and take on impossible odds to save them. In another rp that he's part of, he'd taken the Primera and the Cero, with the Espada Commander watching, to save someone whom he's only ever shown dislike for, that he'd desribe in the words 'Rude, annoying, and wish she'd back the hell off'. He often speaks in a slightly muffled voice, lowering his voice several tones, though it's still usually loud enough to be made out from a decent distance, like a normal talk. His voice is prone to crack. He's the type of person that most would call a complete ass, and rude, the kind who'd have minimal friends and most likely several fights, but in the battle, he'd, as said before, would jump on the grenade to save his comrades.
History:
ROKUNGAI
He grew up in the 4th section, relatively comfortable, and being adopted into a 'family' a few years after he died in the human world *doesn't remember any of it* He hardly got along with the family, but he got along enough to do so.
Despite getting along with the 'dad' of the family, he however, did not get along with any of his siblings. Constant arguments, and many fights, which he often lost, thanks to his slim frame, lacking in physical strength, though that did teach him how to take a fight. This went on for a while, the patience on either side, growing thin, and he often left for weeks on end.
Sieru often left for weeks on end, the 'dad' discovering that he had been travelling Rokungai on a linear path, having 6 points where he slept for a few days, 3 at the very most, before moving on, the house that belonged to the 'family' bering the only in door place he slept, where he spent 5 days, to be with his best friend, which was his 'dad'.
This continued, the times he was at home, he was fighting and arguing with the siblings, and idly watching his 'dad', as a friend. But soemthing happened on one the many times, that require a little explaining. As said once already, Sieru had gotten in many fights with his siblings, but Sieru wasn't the only one the his siblings had fights with, there were other 'family's about, and a few gangs running around as well. And well, one thing led to another, and while Sieru was gone, his siblings got in a fight with one of those gangs.
They were beaten pretty bad, but this wasn't much of an average street fight, the gang was out for blood, and as the blade was drawn to finish off one of his brothers, Sieru conveniently, meta-gamingly, whatever you'd like to call a miracle, showed up, with a rock beamed at the one holding the blade. "Oi!" was what was yelled as Sieru jumped on the other, to the ground. It hadn't been much of a fight, Sieru was rather small compared to, and quite out-numbered, even with his siblings help, and lo and behold, his valiant effort to try and hold the gang from killing one of his siblings led to a knife in the gut, as he bled on the ground. As they went in to kill, the second miracle that day happened, and an officer from the Shinigami, on patrol, or a walk, or among a many other possibilities or combination of possibilities, the male officer had shown up, halting the fight, the presencd of a shinigami commanding instant respect.
Sieru, not mortally wounded, stood holding his side, putting pressure on it, watched in slight awe of the shinigami, hunched slightly over from it. But rather than thanking the shinigami for saving his life and that of his siblings, he merely remarked. "Who the hell are you?". Upon turning around, Sieru felt the crushing spiritual pressure, staggering to the side, coughing, hunger over-taking his being, as the shinigami watched him collapse to the ground.
A week later, he was hungry continuously, spending all his little bits of money on bread and water to keep himself from starving to death, and it was his 'dad' that gave him the idea to go and become a shinigami himself. Taking it as an excuse to leave the place he'd called home since he could remember, he left. It wasn't so much that he hated the place. It was the annoyance of his sibling's mixed feelings towards him. For as long as they knew him, he hadn't lifted a finger to help them in such things, but had just risked his life for them, almost dying because of it. It had become awkward to stay because of it. And with the quick good-bye, he left, joining the academy.
SHINIGAMI ACADEMY
He made it, without a fail on any test, passing the different forms, and educational merits. Like in the rukongai, he didn't have many friends, and was quickly cast out as a little rude piece of *bleep*, though instead of a 'family' this time around, he belonged to a classroom. To him, not much difference, minus his 'dad'.
He was the one who got the homework in mostly completed, almost never fully, and sat in the back, not participating until forced in the different classroom activities, by the teachers. He never made, nor bothered getting friends, disliking the contact of several people, rather than out of shyness.
Often skipping out on different field trips, he even missed the first trip to human world because he thought it'd be a bother. This he got in trouble for, quite a bit actually, as he didn't even try to come up with a reason, and just said 'didn't feel like it' as his excuse. He made one friend throughout his time in the academy.
He was the one other person everyone avoided, for different reasons aside from not trying. He was called Yumi, and he was what you'd call the class-bully in a way. At least those were the rumours and tales of him. He never actually bullied, but what he did, was during their spars, he showed minimal mercy, often having to be able to be grabbed off his opponent before any permanent damage. This wasn't done out of hate or spite, but an advanced reaction of 'fight or flight'.
Wouldn't you know it was these reasons that Sieru and Yumi fought. Almost every day, verbal or physical, and the hatred they showed each other was obvious and plain. They were never chosen by their instructors to be sparring partners, for the plain fact that it was plain they'd wind up killing each other.
This common hate between was evident from the first few years of the academy. Why do I say these two were friends? Well as you know Sieru often skipped out on different trips and outside of class-time activities. But every once in a while he did go on one. And this time it was to observe a hollow hunt, and those who'd qualified for this high danger opportunity, was Sieru, Yumi, and two other class-mates, acompanying members of the 8th division.
With Sieru and Yumi within the same group like this, things started bad, and got worse. While they didn't speak or fight with each other, one could definitely feel the tense atmosphere between them. However despite these circumstances, you see, this is how these two became friends.
It was when they were on the hollow hunt. Told to hang back and watch as the division team did their work, they were left unguarded, as each target they were supposed to grab were all congregated 300 yards due north. 5 of them, which was all Soul Society had detected. As such they were told to wait and observe from a safe distance. Yumi and Sieru, you see, were none too fond of this, being rather confident within their abilities, figured they could handle the hollows. But aside from that, you see, they also didn't like the fact of having to wait with each other.
On this fateful night, there were 7 hollows in total, two of which couldn't be detected. These snuck up on the students, quickly slaying two of them in a surprise attack. It was through Sieru and Yumi working together was that they became friends.
Forced to work together and hold them off, Sieru and Yumi both attacked. The battle itself wasn't important, it goes well enough to say that they would have lost, except that the team, once the powers came from behind, dispatched and seperated. But what was important, you see, is that Sieru and Yumi became, well not best friends, but friends.
This change was evident. They spent their breaks together, as neither had any others they could stand being near for long.
Sieru, even his adopted family thought he was much better off with a friend now, happier rather than so forlorn.
Their rivalry still existed, though it wasn't about killing or hurting each other, it was more along the lines of friendly competition, though they definitely didn't pull punches.
This went on for sometime, until graduation day, where all last year students who passed the final tests were to be elected into different squads.
Sieru went to the 5th division whilst Yumi was elected into the Omnitsukido. They haven't seen or heard from each other since.
Additional Info:
General
Name: Mizukami (Water God)
Spirit Description:
Sealed:
A normal katana, at least it so appears in size and shape, sheathed in dark blue. But its difficult to draw out of the sheath for on particular reason, in reference to his shikai's abilities. You see, its constantly damp, minorly attracting the moisture in the air to it, making it often damp. Because of this constant dampness, there's rusted spots on the sheath and blade itself, the bright red of it showing up distinctly.
Shikai
Activation Phrase: Drink to your Heart's Content, Mizukami!
Appearance:
A beautiful and elegant taichi sword the length of a wakizashi. The blade, hilt, and guard are Azure blue, with the edge being sky blue. The ribbon on the end of most taichi swords isn't there. A sheath is metallic and strapped to his side.
Abilities:
NOTE
Due to the primary effect of Dasui Suru, he'd be more than liekly, if not completely banned from going, limited in the human world to small groups with long range support, if any group, and desert areas, as it's heavily destructive to an environment by the removal of water, as well as high potentiality of friendly fire.
Akuarune (Water Rune)
Giving absolute control to water in all its forms, this is merely extended by the different attacks named below, however one can do many more things with water. Water controlled by him, will not be absorbed into his shikai. This has of course it's limitations, he can't lift out a lake with ease, nor could he with effort. It does however, give him heavy control of water in its liquid. (Per example given by Ryuzaki 'Water Bender' though he can't freeze it)
Depending on what he does like this, is how much Reishi it takes of him.
Dasui Suru
Absorbs water surely from the surrounding atmospheres, killing surrounding plants and making the air dry as a bone. All will feel this effect. This includes people within the 100 foot radius, the closer they are the faster water is drained from their systems into his shikai. This is a passive effect of his shikai and doesn't requite activation. Water from plants and standing water will be quickly drained into his shikai, however from beings with spiritual energies this is much slower. The reason given that it's much slower to steal water from creatures with spiritual pressure. As I use the term water, but this also includes the solid and gaseous forms of water. This stops, only when he sheaths it.
A continual drain on him, though low, adds up over time. It goes at a constant rate.
mizu ga hon'yaku (Water Translate)
By sacrificing water he's gathered together, when a strike lands on him, It'll splash, as his form is replaced by water, while he flash-steps out of the way.
The water adds confusion, and slight blindness as it'd splash into the opponent, eyes as well, it takes water that's been already sealed into his shikai, energy to bring it out, and a flash step.
Atsuryoku (Pressure)
Fires small bits of pressurized water at the opponent, aimed by the tip of his sword. The range is 50 feet before it becomes a harmless splash. 30 feet out it'll leave a bruise. 20 feet it'll leave a heavy bruise. Anything less will pierce skin. 5 feet can pierce damascus steel. Point-blank, isn't much going to stop it from piercing through.
haidoro kyanon (Hydro Cannon)
Channeling his powers through, he can open his mouth and fire a blast of water, that'll push back and crush an opponent. This can span the length of 20 feet, with high knockback and a heavy hit.
Bankai
Activation Phrase: Bankai, Mizukami Toketsu (Final Release {or second release} Freezing Water God)
Appearance:
Gauntlets align his hands, going half-way to his elbows and a flexible metal pipe comes from each side, disappearing beneath his sleeveless shirt. He loses the armour he wore beneath his shirt before, and his shirt becomes sleeveless, and loses the fish-nets as well. A visor of dark blue goes across his eyes, hiding them, covering his ears as well.
Abilities:
Ben (Valve)
The water that has been stored and sealed by the shikai can all be released at once, launching a wave of pressurized water in the surrounding areas, in many situations effectively flooding the areas, dropping the opponent beneath the water. This is done upon entry to bankai and sets up for the bankai abilities.
This uses minimal energy as it merely releases.
kōrudo (Cold)
The water that was released from the move Ben from his shikai, he calls out 'Korudo' and it freezes into solid ice. The ice is comparable to blue ice, really dense, and very hard to melt.
This requires a good amount of energy.
Reito Seru (Frozen Cell)
The ben is released flooding, the Korudo freeze whatever's inside the waters, and Reito Seru Condenses the ice into extremely dense walls of blue ice, trapping the opponent, if they've been caught by Ben and Korudo. This cannot be melted, thanks to the incredible density of it.
This require a high amount of energy, and is used to capture an opponent alive.
kanzen ni kawaku (Dry out)
Anything trapped by Ben and Korudo, is frozen in place. The ice imprisoning them will quickly drain all moisture from anything trapped within, leaving a mummified husk behind.
This is an ability of his shikai to the extreme. It also takes up a lot of energy, but those caught within lose all the water within their bodies, killing them, or if not quite, they'd die soon after.
gyaku barubu (Reverse Valve)
This will draw back in all the water released by the original Ben, to be used again with the combinations of Ben, Korudo, Reito Seru, and Kanzen Ni Kawaku. While it near instantly brings back.
This also takes up a lot of energy, as is quite obvious from how much it'll take in.
atsuryoku shīru (Pressure Seal)
Just as his Atsuryoku from his shikai state, this is as thus essentially the same thing, however the range is tripled in the effect.going to 100 feet will pierce the skin. 130 feet will leave a greening bruise. 140 feet will leave a dark bruise. 150 feet will leave a light bruise. Anything more will be a harmless splash.
This takes minimal energy and is aimed by the tips of his fingers.
Base shinigami spells #1 to #33 in the 3 forms. Lacks the ability to use healing kido spells.
A certain ability of his allows him to save face against strong opponents. He feels every bit of spirit pressure pushed on him, like any normal shinigami, but he is not to be over-whelmed by these. A captain, as example, could be staring down at him, focusing all the pressure he could muster down onto
Other Characters:
None at the moment.
Roleplay Sample:
(It's an older sample of my roleplaying, I've improved since the time of this, but I think it's still a viable example for me. Let me know if any want me to change it, and I"ll write one up that's more recent and with Sieru)
(Starts in about the middle, but this is a combative roleplay, taking place in a Naruto universe, between me and another user. The character I control is the masked one, and I am fighitng one called 'Komari')
(The name's are flopped as, the one's with PuppetmasterRye before it, are posts by me, the one's with Aereno in front are posted by my opponent.
PuppetmasterRye: "Tattoo's?" she asked, though the voice was still indeterminable by gender, though the secret was lost that she was a short girl, like her opponent. Like my... opponent, she thought. The Two clones disappeared as the snakes clasped around them, as the real Masked one, and body flickered to the front of Komari, now that the wind attack was done, and gazed into Komari's eyes, before expelling the poisonous gas, protected herself by the filter in the mask to surround all of them, forming rapid hand signs between the two, even whilst the gas went out, as she gazed into Komari's eyes through the mask.
Aereno: Komari gracefully leaped backwards away from the woman dodging the poison. She smiled baring her long white fangs, her own vile poison dripping from them. "Nice try," she laughed. She bite her thumb again and preformed more hand signs, "Summoning jutsu twin balls of iron boulders," she said. White smoke poof in her face and two 8 foot large iron balls appeared before her. "Heh lets play ball."
PuppetmasterRye: "I'd Rather not" she said, rushing forward, jumping over the 8 foot balls, throwing a few kunais, with a side of 2 shuriken arcing to lower the blind spots of the attack, and started forming seals more seals, to help the genjutsu's requirements she had placed by looking into Komari's eyes. She held the seal of the rat, two of her fingers on one hand up, and the others wrapped around the fingers of the first.
Aereno: "Weak!" Komari shouted as she concentrated chakra into her feet and she did a front flip forward dodging the attacks by the woman and landing in front of the balls. She then quickly formed hand signs, "Ninja art, palms of air," she said before she out stretched her arms and flipped her palms right side up as strong gusts of circular motion started to circulate between them. "This is the end," she mused before she placed her palms on the iron balls and caused them to rise and float in the air. "As long as I control this jutsu I can rotate and control how these balls move." One of the balls lowers and rotates around her body at a quick speed. "I'd like to see you pierce this defense, I don't need my eyes so I'll hunt you by smell," she laughed before closing her eyes to repel any genjutsu. The ball in the air suddenly plummeted downwards before slamming down on top of the location of the woman trying to squash her.
PuppetmasterRye: The masked one used one last genjutsu, disappearing into the number of flower petals, the genjutsu that had been placed when she had come in close to use the poison mist techniques. As her form erupted into pink sakura petals, the scent of the flowers all over, their petals releasing the heavily scented pollen. And hopped into the air as silently as she could throwing a kunai into the open spot defended by wind at the top, and as she formed the seal of the dragon, the kunai she had thrown increase in speed with a protective covering of wind to stop the path from being interrupted by other winds.
Aereno: "Huh? Flowers? I can't smell her..." Komari thought to herself as she fell under the influence of the genjutsu. Unknown to her the chakra powered kunai sliced through the air and slammed into her stomach. "Ah," she screamed before releasing her jutsu and collapsing to the floor. The two giant balls no longer being controlled feel from the sky and crashed to the ground. "You bastard!" Komari roared as she stood up shakily and pulled the bloody kunai from her body. "I'm going to kill you," she laughed as she ripped her kimono off and exposed her fishnet shirt and long black pants. An odd mark on her neck started to pulse before a black spiral pattern formed all over her body and her chakra glowed red. 'I'm special, I have true power unlike you," she said as she glared at the woman no longer affected from the genjutsu since the rush of chakra canceled it out.
PuppetmasterRye: The genjutsu dispelled, she dropped to the ground, the mask gazing calmly across to her opponent. "A cursed seal?" she half-asked, already knowing the answer as she watched her body become covered in the mark. She formed the seal of the rat again, watching her opponents eyes from within the mask, again sending out the genjutsu type of chakra into her opponents eyes, ready to attack with another type of genjutsu, as soon as she charged, or attacked.
PluviasIncomitatus: "No, go" she smiled while I have my curse mark activated I can change the flow of my chakra and even stop it all together just long enough to render genjutsu useless. "I hope you can fight because I will show no mercy to you now," she laughed. With that said Komari bite her thumb and formed more hand signs, "Summoning jutsu" she said before placing her hands on the floor and watching as a white cloud of smoke appeared but when it vanished there was nothing there. 'What," she said shocked.
Aereno: "No, go" she smiled while I have my curse mark activated I can change the flow of my chakra and even stop it all together just long enough to render genjutsu useless. "I hope you can fight because I will show no mercy to you now," she laughed. With that said Komari bite her thumb and formed more hand signs, "Summoning jutsu" she said before placing her hands on the floor and watching as a white cloud of smoke appeared but when it vanished there was nothing there. 'What," she said shocked.
PuppetmasterRye: You see that?" she said confidentally, drawing out a third blade with its sheath, ripping part of the loose pants she wore. Through the tattered pants, tighter cloth beneath could be seen, still hiding her skin. "You think you're immune to my genjutsu's, but that is a direct effect of mine" she said, assuming the battojutsu stance, watching what she was going to do.
Aereno: Komari glared at her, "Shut the f**k up! B***h!" she said before she smiled and took her calm and cold, seductive posture. "I have to kill you now, play time is over," she said as she strung some hand signs. "Ninja art whirl wind of blades, four corners north, south, east and west," she growled. Suddenly a giant gust of wind formed from all four directions surrounding the woman before suddenly the four gusts shot at her in a great gust of wind blades, deadly enough to slice her in half. As she did this Komari sprang into the air and grabbed two kunai from her pouch and infused them with her chakra and she tossed them down from above using wind to guide them like the woman had done to her. The ground shook as the earth below her floor exploded as a giant white snake popped out of the ground maw gaped trying to swallow her whole. "This has got to end it," Komari thought to her self exhausted.
PuppetmasterRye: Beneath the mask the face was unworried until as she jumped forward, into the waiting jaws of the snake, almost directly into the mouth, forming the seal for the shadow clones, filling the mouth up to the point of exploding as she was hurled out of the snake, immediately dispelling the several clones that as soon as her real body came free. and drew her sword, to repel the kunai that'd been thrown with the chakra blade. Inside the mask, she was breathing heavily into the muffler, this being one of the toughest fights she'd ever been in, she thought as she ripped one of the kunais out of her shoulder, having barely dodged the other one.
Aereno: "Heh, you seem tired. I'm afraid I'm going to make you're death extremely painful," she laughed. With that said she reached into her breasts and produced a scroll and smiled. "This will be hard to swallow." She unrolled it and activated by paying more chakra the effects of the curse mark were eroding her body and causing her much pain. The scroll vanished into smoke and was replaced with a long tube which she placed in her mouth and tilted her head back and swallowed the countless iron balls in it before she discarded it. "Time to die baby," she laughed madly. She then ripped her shirt off exposing her large breasts and white skin. The curse mark seemed to spread before it covered her entire body and turned her skin a dark brown, what seemed to be scales formed all over her body and her blonde hair turned a dark red and grew until it reached the floor. Her teeth became long fangs that hung from her mouth and her nails and toenails turned into claws, her sandals ripped and fell off as her feet turned bird like and large bird like wings ripped out of her back. "Gigigigi!" she squealed before she flapped her wings hard causing a large gust of wind to shoot at the woman as she launched herself up into the sky.
PuppetmasterRye: Breathing deeply, she sheathed her sword, and formed several and rapid hand-signs, taking up the time of her transformation with the complicated jutsu she was going to perform and jumped back, finishing as the gust of wind's sound launched the harpy forward, and hopped up, summoning a shadow clone, that she could jump off of the back of the clone increase her height from the jump, flinging out her sword, launching it in a straight line, as her eyes searched to make contact with the harpy.
Aereno: Komari smiled as she stopped in the air and formed hand signs. "Hurricane vacuum," she screamed as she breathed in deep and sucked up a large quantity of air and filled her lungs and stomach with it. Her tummy started to expand as it inflated to a large side and her cheeks swelled. "Hurricane release, iron wind blast barrage!" she screamed as she exhaled. A giant torrent of wind blew out of her mouth at the woman at high wind speeds. It was deadly enough to slice her to pieces but masked in the wind 30 chakra enhanced iron balls were spat at the woman, each one strong enough to punch a clean hole right through her.
PuppetmasterRye: The masked one, held onto the sheath, holding it as a sword. The suprised look that came across her face as the words iron wind blast barrage, circulated. The shocked look was hidden by the mask, as she called out her own counter. "Kazaeshin!" she said, imbuing the chakra she had left into the sheath and her arms, increasing her speed quick as she launched the kazaeshin wind counters to nullify the winds. But the satisfaction of it only lasted a mere fraction of a second as one of the iron balls ripped through her arm, taking it and the sheath with it as she twisted, avoiding one of the balls from ripping through her heart, and another from ripping off her head. One of the iron balls ripped through her left arm again, taking it off at the shoulder again. One grazed her, tearing the muscle from the bone, as she fell to the ground, landing heavily, at first landing on the good leg, but fell to the side, tumbling hard on to the ground.
Aereno: "I'm not going to lose to you! Die all ready damn you!" she scared before she forced herself high up into the sky. "I will kill you or go down trying, my father gave this mission of killing you and I will not let him down," she said with a tear in her eye. She bite her thumb and formed hand signs, "Summoning jutsu iron ball of doom," she coughed. She placed her hand on her wing and watched as smoke appeared then vanished. A giant ion ball the size of a building then feel from the sky and crashed down on the building that they were fighting on, crushing it. "Heh," she said coughing up blood before she returned to normal and fell from the sky and slammed into the ball before rolling off of it and hitting the floor half dead.
PuppetmasterRye: Mustering her strength, and killing the pain with adrenaline, she pushed herself into a half-leap with the combination of her good leg, and only arm, as the ball crashed, breaking her foot on her bad leg by just grazing it, as she willed herself to stay awake through the pain.
The army was nearly defeated, and the morale was being crushed by how much injuries and damage the Kage, and the Right Hand took. Many thinking the right hand to be dead, thanks to their lines of sight being blocked.
Aereno: Komari broke into tears as she started to cry, "Father I am sorry I failed you. Forgive me please," she said as she turned her head and stared blankly at the woman who lay not more than a few feet from her. "You survived my jutsu somehow, I guess you are worthy of the rumors that people tell about you, you won fair and square," she said.
PuppetmasterRye: "You aren't half bad." she said, trying to stand up, but falling forward, smacking her head on the cement, the small metallic ring of the mask sounded. The movement just caused her more of a headache, but did bring her closer to Komari. She reached up with her one arm, and ripped the mask from her head. Her face was that of a 14 year old girls, her eyes filled with pain, casting the last bits of chakra into Komari's eyes. WIth a hypnotization effect, it'd make Komari lose herself, and believe herself to be Fyrelle, the masked one, to keep the identity until death. "Take this... and go die, bitch" she said, tossing the mask between them, within reach of Komari.
Aereno: Komari reached forward and grabbed the mask before placing it on her face and relaxing slightly. "I am Fyrelle, right hand man of the Magumakage," she said before she took her last breath and gave up the ghost. A small pool of blood surrounded her, leaking from the wound in her stomach.
Meanwhile, the real Fyrelle disappeared, causing got strain as her circulatory systems went into over-load as she crossed from the dimensional shift, using her bloodline to escape from the doomed wreckage, a tear looking out for her loss. She may have won her fight, but she lost all that was important to her.
Deep in the forest, a long ways away the unconscious body of the former hand of Magumagakure lay, heart rate almost nil, and bleeding wounds of her missing arm, and smashed leg, ground.
The magumagakure army fell and broke away about the same time as the two fyrelle's made their exits, one from the town, the other from life, and the other fight, between akatsuki, and the Magumakage ended, with neither party able to help their armies.
General Info
Name: Sieru (no sur name)
Gender: Male
Age: 15 (appearing, 156 otherwise)
Division: 5th (As division 5 seems to be lacking in members, aside from the Lieuteant {or Vice Captain} I would like to have this applied to a higher seat if possible.
Rank:
Physical Description:
aereno.deviantart.com/art/Sieru-162660067?q=1&qo=1
Pale skin lines his thin face, grey eyes watching from beneath the brown bangs that are cut short, and a bit unevenly above them. He looks as if he could probably use a beach and pair of swim trunks for a tan. His grey eyes are almost always set withing a glare, usually looking, without deviation, to the horizon before him, rather than around at the useless and meaningless decoratory, or activities about him. His lightly coloured brown hair is cut short, and sticks up at odd places, despite its clean appearance. Cut in a Layered style, if there is a style to it, its 2 or 3 inches long at the very longest. He has a small bone-set, and from head to toe, is abou 5'5" in height.
Sieru's outfit is similar to most other shinigami's uniforms aside from a few things. The black of the uniform was a small blue-ish tint to it, much like a raven can have a green or purple tint to their feathers. The differences in his uniform, and a regular one are as follows. THere isn't an opening in the front, being a regular shirt, rather than a wrap around kimono style, like most. On his upper arms are slits, revealing that he wears a fish-net shirt beneath it. Hidden from view, Sieru wears a strong armour on his shoulders, protecting his neck, collar bone, and upper-chest area, as well as making it appear as if he has wider shoulders than he does. He wears his zanpakutoh *See zanpakutoh section for description*) at his side, hanging up to down, besides front to back.
Personality:
A lazy, and drawn back personality, that contradicts his habits. He'd rather sit and wait out the storm, rather than rush and try to make it end. Being lazy and drawn back, he sits in the back of classes, or meeting halls, seemingly unpaying attention, as he freely stared around different areas, watching and waiting. However, his habits seem to contradict this, as he rushes from place to place, hardly ever staying more than a few days at the same place, refusing to wait any longer. However, his paths are linear. He stays a few days and point A, then goes to B, then C, Then D, then back to A, and continues in the same pattern, until an outside force influences his paths.
When Reacting with others, he tends to be short and curt, not saying any more than he usually needs to, preferring to be alone, and will often stroll on past someone in moderate trouble. However, once again, his habits contradict his personality. If an ally or friend, or just merely someone he's taken moderate interest in, he'll jump on the grenade to save their life, so to speak, and take on impossible odds to save them. In another rp that he's part of, he'd taken the Primera and the Cero, with the Espada Commander watching, to save someone whom he's only ever shown dislike for, that he'd desribe in the words 'Rude, annoying, and wish she'd back the hell off'. He often speaks in a slightly muffled voice, lowering his voice several tones, though it's still usually loud enough to be made out from a decent distance, like a normal talk. His voice is prone to crack. He's the type of person that most would call a complete ass, and rude, the kind who'd have minimal friends and most likely several fights, but in the battle, he'd, as said before, would jump on the grenade to save his comrades.
History:
ROKUNGAI
He grew up in the 4th section, relatively comfortable, and being adopted into a 'family' a few years after he died in the human world *doesn't remember any of it* He hardly got along with the family, but he got along enough to do so.
Despite getting along with the 'dad' of the family, he however, did not get along with any of his siblings. Constant arguments, and many fights, which he often lost, thanks to his slim frame, lacking in physical strength, though that did teach him how to take a fight. This went on for a while, the patience on either side, growing thin, and he often left for weeks on end.
Sieru often left for weeks on end, the 'dad' discovering that he had been travelling Rokungai on a linear path, having 6 points where he slept for a few days, 3 at the very most, before moving on, the house that belonged to the 'family' bering the only in door place he slept, where he spent 5 days, to be with his best friend, which was his 'dad'.
This continued, the times he was at home, he was fighting and arguing with the siblings, and idly watching his 'dad', as a friend. But soemthing happened on one the many times, that require a little explaining. As said once already, Sieru had gotten in many fights with his siblings, but Sieru wasn't the only one the his siblings had fights with, there were other 'family's about, and a few gangs running around as well. And well, one thing led to another, and while Sieru was gone, his siblings got in a fight with one of those gangs.
They were beaten pretty bad, but this wasn't much of an average street fight, the gang was out for blood, and as the blade was drawn to finish off one of his brothers, Sieru conveniently, meta-gamingly, whatever you'd like to call a miracle, showed up, with a rock beamed at the one holding the blade. "Oi!" was what was yelled as Sieru jumped on the other, to the ground. It hadn't been much of a fight, Sieru was rather small compared to, and quite out-numbered, even with his siblings help, and lo and behold, his valiant effort to try and hold the gang from killing one of his siblings led to a knife in the gut, as he bled on the ground. As they went in to kill, the second miracle that day happened, and an officer from the Shinigami, on patrol, or a walk, or among a many other possibilities or combination of possibilities, the male officer had shown up, halting the fight, the presencd of a shinigami commanding instant respect.
Sieru, not mortally wounded, stood holding his side, putting pressure on it, watched in slight awe of the shinigami, hunched slightly over from it. But rather than thanking the shinigami for saving his life and that of his siblings, he merely remarked. "Who the hell are you?". Upon turning around, Sieru felt the crushing spiritual pressure, staggering to the side, coughing, hunger over-taking his being, as the shinigami watched him collapse to the ground.
A week later, he was hungry continuously, spending all his little bits of money on bread and water to keep himself from starving to death, and it was his 'dad' that gave him the idea to go and become a shinigami himself. Taking it as an excuse to leave the place he'd called home since he could remember, he left. It wasn't so much that he hated the place. It was the annoyance of his sibling's mixed feelings towards him. For as long as they knew him, he hadn't lifted a finger to help them in such things, but had just risked his life for them, almost dying because of it. It had become awkward to stay because of it. And with the quick good-bye, he left, joining the academy.
SHINIGAMI ACADEMY
He made it, without a fail on any test, passing the different forms, and educational merits. Like in the rukongai, he didn't have many friends, and was quickly cast out as a little rude piece of *bleep*, though instead of a 'family' this time around, he belonged to a classroom. To him, not much difference, minus his 'dad'.
He was the one who got the homework in mostly completed, almost never fully, and sat in the back, not participating until forced in the different classroom activities, by the teachers. He never made, nor bothered getting friends, disliking the contact of several people, rather than out of shyness.
Often skipping out on different field trips, he even missed the first trip to human world because he thought it'd be a bother. This he got in trouble for, quite a bit actually, as he didn't even try to come up with a reason, and just said 'didn't feel like it' as his excuse. He made one friend throughout his time in the academy.
He was the one other person everyone avoided, for different reasons aside from not trying. He was called Yumi, and he was what you'd call the class-bully in a way. At least those were the rumours and tales of him. He never actually bullied, but what he did, was during their spars, he showed minimal mercy, often having to be able to be grabbed off his opponent before any permanent damage. This wasn't done out of hate or spite, but an advanced reaction of 'fight or flight'.
Wouldn't you know it was these reasons that Sieru and Yumi fought. Almost every day, verbal or physical, and the hatred they showed each other was obvious and plain. They were never chosen by their instructors to be sparring partners, for the plain fact that it was plain they'd wind up killing each other.
This common hate between was evident from the first few years of the academy. Why do I say these two were friends? Well as you know Sieru often skipped out on different trips and outside of class-time activities. But every once in a while he did go on one. And this time it was to observe a hollow hunt, and those who'd qualified for this high danger opportunity, was Sieru, Yumi, and two other class-mates, acompanying members of the 8th division.
With Sieru and Yumi within the same group like this, things started bad, and got worse. While they didn't speak or fight with each other, one could definitely feel the tense atmosphere between them. However despite these circumstances, you see, this is how these two became friends.
It was when they were on the hollow hunt. Told to hang back and watch as the division team did their work, they were left unguarded, as each target they were supposed to grab were all congregated 300 yards due north. 5 of them, which was all Soul Society had detected. As such they were told to wait and observe from a safe distance. Yumi and Sieru, you see, were none too fond of this, being rather confident within their abilities, figured they could handle the hollows. But aside from that, you see, they also didn't like the fact of having to wait with each other.
On this fateful night, there were 7 hollows in total, two of which couldn't be detected. These snuck up on the students, quickly slaying two of them in a surprise attack. It was through Sieru and Yumi working together was that they became friends.
Forced to work together and hold them off, Sieru and Yumi both attacked. The battle itself wasn't important, it goes well enough to say that they would have lost, except that the team, once the powers came from behind, dispatched and seperated. But what was important, you see, is that Sieru and Yumi became, well not best friends, but friends.
This change was evident. They spent their breaks together, as neither had any others they could stand being near for long.
Sieru, even his adopted family thought he was much better off with a friend now, happier rather than so forlorn.
Their rivalry still existed, though it wasn't about killing or hurting each other, it was more along the lines of friendly competition, though they definitely didn't pull punches.
This went on for sometime, until graduation day, where all last year students who passed the final tests were to be elected into different squads.
Sieru went to the 5th division whilst Yumi was elected into the Omnitsukido. They haven't seen or heard from each other since.
Additional Info:
Zanpakuto
General
Name: Mizukami (Water God)
Spirit Description:
Sealed:
A normal katana, at least it so appears in size and shape, sheathed in dark blue. But its difficult to draw out of the sheath for on particular reason, in reference to his shikai's abilities. You see, its constantly damp, minorly attracting the moisture in the air to it, making it often damp. Because of this constant dampness, there's rusted spots on the sheath and blade itself, the bright red of it showing up distinctly.
Shikai
Activation Phrase: Drink to your Heart's Content, Mizukami!
Appearance:
A beautiful and elegant taichi sword the length of a wakizashi. The blade, hilt, and guard are Azure blue, with the edge being sky blue. The ribbon on the end of most taichi swords isn't there. A sheath is metallic and strapped to his side.
Abilities:
NOTE
Due to the primary effect of Dasui Suru, he'd be more than liekly, if not completely banned from going, limited in the human world to small groups with long range support, if any group, and desert areas, as it's heavily destructive to an environment by the removal of water, as well as high potentiality of friendly fire.
Akuarune (Water Rune)
Giving absolute control to water in all its forms, this is merely extended by the different attacks named below, however one can do many more things with water. Water controlled by him, will not be absorbed into his shikai. This has of course it's limitations, he can't lift out a lake with ease, nor could he with effort. It does however, give him heavy control of water in its liquid. (Per example given by Ryuzaki 'Water Bender' though he can't freeze it)
Depending on what he does like this, is how much Reishi it takes of him.
Dasui Suru
Absorbs water surely from the surrounding atmospheres, killing surrounding plants and making the air dry as a bone. All will feel this effect. This includes people within the 100 foot radius, the closer they are the faster water is drained from their systems into his shikai. This is a passive effect of his shikai and doesn't requite activation. Water from plants and standing water will be quickly drained into his shikai, however from beings with spiritual energies this is much slower. The reason given that it's much slower to steal water from creatures with spiritual pressure. As I use the term water, but this also includes the solid and gaseous forms of water. This stops, only when he sheaths it.
A continual drain on him, though low, adds up over time. It goes at a constant rate.
mizu ga hon'yaku (Water Translate)
By sacrificing water he's gathered together, when a strike lands on him, It'll splash, as his form is replaced by water, while he flash-steps out of the way.
The water adds confusion, and slight blindness as it'd splash into the opponent, eyes as well, it takes water that's been already sealed into his shikai, energy to bring it out, and a flash step.
Atsuryoku (Pressure)
Fires small bits of pressurized water at the opponent, aimed by the tip of his sword. The range is 50 feet before it becomes a harmless splash. 30 feet out it'll leave a bruise. 20 feet it'll leave a heavy bruise. Anything less will pierce skin. 5 feet can pierce damascus steel. Point-blank, isn't much going to stop it from piercing through.
haidoro kyanon (Hydro Cannon)
Channeling his powers through, he can open his mouth and fire a blast of water, that'll push back and crush an opponent. This can span the length of 20 feet, with high knockback and a heavy hit.
Bankai
Activation Phrase: Bankai, Mizukami Toketsu (Final Release {or second release} Freezing Water God)
Appearance:
Gauntlets align his hands, going half-way to his elbows and a flexible metal pipe comes from each side, disappearing beneath his sleeveless shirt. He loses the armour he wore beneath his shirt before, and his shirt becomes sleeveless, and loses the fish-nets as well. A visor of dark blue goes across his eyes, hiding them, covering his ears as well.
Abilities:
Ben (Valve)
The water that has been stored and sealed by the shikai can all be released at once, launching a wave of pressurized water in the surrounding areas, in many situations effectively flooding the areas, dropping the opponent beneath the water. This is done upon entry to bankai and sets up for the bankai abilities.
This uses minimal energy as it merely releases.
kōrudo (Cold)
The water that was released from the move Ben from his shikai, he calls out 'Korudo' and it freezes into solid ice. The ice is comparable to blue ice, really dense, and very hard to melt.
This requires a good amount of energy.
Reito Seru (Frozen Cell)
The ben is released flooding, the Korudo freeze whatever's inside the waters, and Reito Seru Condenses the ice into extremely dense walls of blue ice, trapping the opponent, if they've been caught by Ben and Korudo. This cannot be melted, thanks to the incredible density of it.
This require a high amount of energy, and is used to capture an opponent alive.
kanzen ni kawaku (Dry out)
Anything trapped by Ben and Korudo, is frozen in place. The ice imprisoning them will quickly drain all moisture from anything trapped within, leaving a mummified husk behind.
This is an ability of his shikai to the extreme. It also takes up a lot of energy, but those caught within lose all the water within their bodies, killing them, or if not quite, they'd die soon after.
gyaku barubu (Reverse Valve)
This will draw back in all the water released by the original Ben, to be used again with the combinations of Ben, Korudo, Reito Seru, and Kanzen Ni Kawaku. While it near instantly brings back.
This also takes up a lot of energy, as is quite obvious from how much it'll take in.
atsuryoku shīru (Pressure Seal)
Just as his Atsuryoku from his shikai state, this is as thus essentially the same thing, however the range is tripled in the effect.going to 100 feet will pierce the skin. 130 feet will leave a greening bruise. 140 feet will leave a dark bruise. 150 feet will leave a light bruise. Anything more will be a harmless splash.
This takes minimal energy and is aimed by the tips of his fingers.
Shinigami Techniques
Base shinigami spells #1 to #33 in the 3 forms. Lacks the ability to use healing kido spells.
Additional
A certain ability of his allows him to save face against strong opponents. He feels every bit of spirit pressure pushed on him, like any normal shinigami, but he is not to be over-whelmed by these. A captain, as example, could be staring down at him, focusing all the pressure he could muster down onto
Other Characters:
None at the moment.
Roleplay Sample:
(It's an older sample of my roleplaying, I've improved since the time of this, but I think it's still a viable example for me. Let me know if any want me to change it, and I"ll write one up that's more recent and with Sieru)
(Starts in about the middle, but this is a combative roleplay, taking place in a Naruto universe, between me and another user. The character I control is the masked one, and I am fighitng one called 'Komari')
(The name's are flopped as, the one's with PuppetmasterRye before it, are posts by me, the one's with Aereno in front are posted by my opponent.
PuppetmasterRye: "Tattoo's?" she asked, though the voice was still indeterminable by gender, though the secret was lost that she was a short girl, like her opponent. Like my... opponent, she thought. The Two clones disappeared as the snakes clasped around them, as the real Masked one, and body flickered to the front of Komari, now that the wind attack was done, and gazed into Komari's eyes, before expelling the poisonous gas, protected herself by the filter in the mask to surround all of them, forming rapid hand signs between the two, even whilst the gas went out, as she gazed into Komari's eyes through the mask.
Aereno: Komari gracefully leaped backwards away from the woman dodging the poison. She smiled baring her long white fangs, her own vile poison dripping from them. "Nice try," she laughed. She bite her thumb again and preformed more hand signs, "Summoning jutsu twin balls of iron boulders," she said. White smoke poof in her face and two 8 foot large iron balls appeared before her. "Heh lets play ball."
PuppetmasterRye: "I'd Rather not" she said, rushing forward, jumping over the 8 foot balls, throwing a few kunais, with a side of 2 shuriken arcing to lower the blind spots of the attack, and started forming seals more seals, to help the genjutsu's requirements she had placed by looking into Komari's eyes. She held the seal of the rat, two of her fingers on one hand up, and the others wrapped around the fingers of the first.
Aereno: "Weak!" Komari shouted as she concentrated chakra into her feet and she did a front flip forward dodging the attacks by the woman and landing in front of the balls. She then quickly formed hand signs, "Ninja art, palms of air," she said before she out stretched her arms and flipped her palms right side up as strong gusts of circular motion started to circulate between them. "This is the end," she mused before she placed her palms on the iron balls and caused them to rise and float in the air. "As long as I control this jutsu I can rotate and control how these balls move." One of the balls lowers and rotates around her body at a quick speed. "I'd like to see you pierce this defense, I don't need my eyes so I'll hunt you by smell," she laughed before closing her eyes to repel any genjutsu. The ball in the air suddenly plummeted downwards before slamming down on top of the location of the woman trying to squash her.
PuppetmasterRye: The masked one used one last genjutsu, disappearing into the number of flower petals, the genjutsu that had been placed when she had come in close to use the poison mist techniques. As her form erupted into pink sakura petals, the scent of the flowers all over, their petals releasing the heavily scented pollen. And hopped into the air as silently as she could throwing a kunai into the open spot defended by wind at the top, and as she formed the seal of the dragon, the kunai she had thrown increase in speed with a protective covering of wind to stop the path from being interrupted by other winds.
Aereno: "Huh? Flowers? I can't smell her..." Komari thought to herself as she fell under the influence of the genjutsu. Unknown to her the chakra powered kunai sliced through the air and slammed into her stomach. "Ah," she screamed before releasing her jutsu and collapsing to the floor. The two giant balls no longer being controlled feel from the sky and crashed to the ground. "You bastard!" Komari roared as she stood up shakily and pulled the bloody kunai from her body. "I'm going to kill you," she laughed as she ripped her kimono off and exposed her fishnet shirt and long black pants. An odd mark on her neck started to pulse before a black spiral pattern formed all over her body and her chakra glowed red. 'I'm special, I have true power unlike you," she said as she glared at the woman no longer affected from the genjutsu since the rush of chakra canceled it out.
PuppetmasterRye: The genjutsu dispelled, she dropped to the ground, the mask gazing calmly across to her opponent. "A cursed seal?" she half-asked, already knowing the answer as she watched her body become covered in the mark. She formed the seal of the rat again, watching her opponents eyes from within the mask, again sending out the genjutsu type of chakra into her opponents eyes, ready to attack with another type of genjutsu, as soon as she charged, or attacked.
PluviasIncomitatus: "No, go" she smiled while I have my curse mark activated I can change the flow of my chakra and even stop it all together just long enough to render genjutsu useless. "I hope you can fight because I will show no mercy to you now," she laughed. With that said Komari bite her thumb and formed more hand signs, "Summoning jutsu" she said before placing her hands on the floor and watching as a white cloud of smoke appeared but when it vanished there was nothing there. 'What," she said shocked.
Aereno: "No, go" she smiled while I have my curse mark activated I can change the flow of my chakra and even stop it all together just long enough to render genjutsu useless. "I hope you can fight because I will show no mercy to you now," she laughed. With that said Komari bite her thumb and formed more hand signs, "Summoning jutsu" she said before placing her hands on the floor and watching as a white cloud of smoke appeared but when it vanished there was nothing there. 'What," she said shocked.
PuppetmasterRye: You see that?" she said confidentally, drawing out a third blade with its sheath, ripping part of the loose pants she wore. Through the tattered pants, tighter cloth beneath could be seen, still hiding her skin. "You think you're immune to my genjutsu's, but that is a direct effect of mine" she said, assuming the battojutsu stance, watching what she was going to do.
Aereno: Komari glared at her, "Shut the f**k up! B***h!" she said before she smiled and took her calm and cold, seductive posture. "I have to kill you now, play time is over," she said as she strung some hand signs. "Ninja art whirl wind of blades, four corners north, south, east and west," she growled. Suddenly a giant gust of wind formed from all four directions surrounding the woman before suddenly the four gusts shot at her in a great gust of wind blades, deadly enough to slice her in half. As she did this Komari sprang into the air and grabbed two kunai from her pouch and infused them with her chakra and she tossed them down from above using wind to guide them like the woman had done to her. The ground shook as the earth below her floor exploded as a giant white snake popped out of the ground maw gaped trying to swallow her whole. "This has got to end it," Komari thought to her self exhausted.
PuppetmasterRye: Beneath the mask the face was unworried until as she jumped forward, into the waiting jaws of the snake, almost directly into the mouth, forming the seal for the shadow clones, filling the mouth up to the point of exploding as she was hurled out of the snake, immediately dispelling the several clones that as soon as her real body came free. and drew her sword, to repel the kunai that'd been thrown with the chakra blade. Inside the mask, she was breathing heavily into the muffler, this being one of the toughest fights she'd ever been in, she thought as she ripped one of the kunais out of her shoulder, having barely dodged the other one.
Aereno: "Heh, you seem tired. I'm afraid I'm going to make you're death extremely painful," she laughed. With that said she reached into her breasts and produced a scroll and smiled. "This will be hard to swallow." She unrolled it and activated by paying more chakra the effects of the curse mark were eroding her body and causing her much pain. The scroll vanished into smoke and was replaced with a long tube which she placed in her mouth and tilted her head back and swallowed the countless iron balls in it before she discarded it. "Time to die baby," she laughed madly. She then ripped her shirt off exposing her large breasts and white skin. The curse mark seemed to spread before it covered her entire body and turned her skin a dark brown, what seemed to be scales formed all over her body and her blonde hair turned a dark red and grew until it reached the floor. Her teeth became long fangs that hung from her mouth and her nails and toenails turned into claws, her sandals ripped and fell off as her feet turned bird like and large bird like wings ripped out of her back. "Gigigigi!" she squealed before she flapped her wings hard causing a large gust of wind to shoot at the woman as she launched herself up into the sky.
PuppetmasterRye: Breathing deeply, she sheathed her sword, and formed several and rapid hand-signs, taking up the time of her transformation with the complicated jutsu she was going to perform and jumped back, finishing as the gust of wind's sound launched the harpy forward, and hopped up, summoning a shadow clone, that she could jump off of the back of the clone increase her height from the jump, flinging out her sword, launching it in a straight line, as her eyes searched to make contact with the harpy.
Aereno: Komari smiled as she stopped in the air and formed hand signs. "Hurricane vacuum," she screamed as she breathed in deep and sucked up a large quantity of air and filled her lungs and stomach with it. Her tummy started to expand as it inflated to a large side and her cheeks swelled. "Hurricane release, iron wind blast barrage!" she screamed as she exhaled. A giant torrent of wind blew out of her mouth at the woman at high wind speeds. It was deadly enough to slice her to pieces but masked in the wind 30 chakra enhanced iron balls were spat at the woman, each one strong enough to punch a clean hole right through her.
PuppetmasterRye: The masked one, held onto the sheath, holding it as a sword. The suprised look that came across her face as the words iron wind blast barrage, circulated. The shocked look was hidden by the mask, as she called out her own counter. "Kazaeshin!" she said, imbuing the chakra she had left into the sheath and her arms, increasing her speed quick as she launched the kazaeshin wind counters to nullify the winds. But the satisfaction of it only lasted a mere fraction of a second as one of the iron balls ripped through her arm, taking it and the sheath with it as she twisted, avoiding one of the balls from ripping through her heart, and another from ripping off her head. One of the iron balls ripped through her left arm again, taking it off at the shoulder again. One grazed her, tearing the muscle from the bone, as she fell to the ground, landing heavily, at first landing on the good leg, but fell to the side, tumbling hard on to the ground.
Aereno: "I'm not going to lose to you! Die all ready damn you!" she scared before she forced herself high up into the sky. "I will kill you or go down trying, my father gave this mission of killing you and I will not let him down," she said with a tear in her eye. She bite her thumb and formed hand signs, "Summoning jutsu iron ball of doom," she coughed. She placed her hand on her wing and watched as smoke appeared then vanished. A giant ion ball the size of a building then feel from the sky and crashed down on the building that they were fighting on, crushing it. "Heh," she said coughing up blood before she returned to normal and fell from the sky and slammed into the ball before rolling off of it and hitting the floor half dead.
PuppetmasterRye: Mustering her strength, and killing the pain with adrenaline, she pushed herself into a half-leap with the combination of her good leg, and only arm, as the ball crashed, breaking her foot on her bad leg by just grazing it, as she willed herself to stay awake through the pain.
The army was nearly defeated, and the morale was being crushed by how much injuries and damage the Kage, and the Right Hand took. Many thinking the right hand to be dead, thanks to their lines of sight being blocked.
Aereno: Komari broke into tears as she started to cry, "Father I am sorry I failed you. Forgive me please," she said as she turned her head and stared blankly at the woman who lay not more than a few feet from her. "You survived my jutsu somehow, I guess you are worthy of the rumors that people tell about you, you won fair and square," she said.
PuppetmasterRye: "You aren't half bad." she said, trying to stand up, but falling forward, smacking her head on the cement, the small metallic ring of the mask sounded. The movement just caused her more of a headache, but did bring her closer to Komari. She reached up with her one arm, and ripped the mask from her head. Her face was that of a 14 year old girls, her eyes filled with pain, casting the last bits of chakra into Komari's eyes. WIth a hypnotization effect, it'd make Komari lose herself, and believe herself to be Fyrelle, the masked one, to keep the identity until death. "Take this... and go die, bitch" she said, tossing the mask between them, within reach of Komari.
Aereno: Komari reached forward and grabbed the mask before placing it on her face and relaxing slightly. "I am Fyrelle, right hand man of the Magumakage," she said before she took her last breath and gave up the ghost. A small pool of blood surrounded her, leaking from the wound in her stomach.
Meanwhile, the real Fyrelle disappeared, causing got strain as her circulatory systems went into over-load as she crossed from the dimensional shift, using her bloodline to escape from the doomed wreckage, a tear looking out for her loss. She may have won her fight, but she lost all that was important to her.
Deep in the forest, a long ways away the unconscious body of the former hand of Magumagakure lay, heart rate almost nil, and bleeding wounds of her missing arm, and smashed leg, ground.
The magumagakure army fell and broke away about the same time as the two fyrelle's made their exits, one from the town, the other from life, and the other fight, between akatsuki, and the Magumakage ended, with neither party able to help their armies.