Asuka Hito

[Asuka Hito]

Arrancar

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General Info

Name: Asuka Hito
Gender: Female
Age: 238
Ranking: Espada
Number: Sexta
Base Type: Adjuchas
Physical Description:

In short, she's pretty cute. Not sexy or out right gorgeous. She's just an extremely cute girl. She's got light teal hair. It's long enough to reach her hips.

Personality

Asuka is probably the strangest Espada that you'll meet by far. She doesn't act like an Espada at all actually. She's not arrogant, mean...nor is she rude or bitchy. She's pretty nice. No catch behind it. It's not a facade or an act. Asuka is just naturally like that. She has reason behind ALL of her actions, always thinking before acting. For the most part though, she's really nice. She has the utmost respect for her comrades. Even if some of them may piss her off, she'll forget that pretty quickly because she knows that they all have to work together.

She's quirky. That's for sure. Her thought process is a bit out there. Constantly thinking of the strangest things. Example; Can you kill a werecow with silver? So many questions...so many left unanswered...The world may never know! Asuka is probably the strangest out of the Espada. Asuka is really friendly. Shinigami? Human? Quincy? Bount? Who the hell cares?! She doesn't. Asuka is willing to befriend anyone as long as they're nice. Well..she would have been friends with that one werecow, Golak but he tried to kill her so that was a big no no.

She's also a bit of an air head. Quite obviously not thinking her way through things properly. Though, she has random strokes of genius. So she's not a total lost cause. But for the most part, she's kinda slow. Sometimes she can take things the wrong way and she'll just throw herself into a fit of paranoia. Sometimes she'll completely miss things and she stare at you blankly like she's expecting a cookie...and sometimes, she's really, really hungry. Yes, I know. Irrelevant but true.

Speaking of irrelevance, Asuka has quite the appetite. Usually, a small meal to her would be 3 plate fulls of food. Her normal intake would be on an average of 6-7 plates of food. She loves human food. She's quite fond of Italian, Thai, Japanese, American and Spanish.

She has a race confusion problem. Meaning, Shinigami aren't exactly shinigami to her. The same goes for Bounts, Humans and, well, anything else that isn't an arrancar. She'll commonly mistake ALL of them for creatures of the night and claim that she cannot trust them of being "x" and accuse them of being "y" so to speak.

Asuka is afraid of alcohol. Meaning, she doesn't drink. Period. This is linked with her human life and has been carried with her throughout the years. Of course, she doesn't remember that it's from her human life. She's likely to scream and cry if you try to force it on her. She's a huge fan of hugs. So, if you're nice to her, she's likely to give you a friendly hug whenever you meet up. She's a bit timid so if you intimidate her she's likely to stray away from you. All in all, she's pretty nice and she'll stick up for what she believes in and do what she thinks is right even is she is just a bit of an oddball.


History:
Abilities (pre resurrecction ):
Additional Info:

Fears: Asuka is afraid of alcohol. Extremely. Especially wine. That, she'll freeze and move away from. It's linked to her human life though, she probably doesn't remember that.

Zanpakuto

General:

Call out phrase/ name: "Slither, Vipera!"

Appearance:

Resurrecctión

Armor/ Appearance:
Abilities:

Hollow Techniques

Additional

Other Characters: N/A
Roleplay Sample:

Oh, trust me, Asuka was feeling the same amount of rage Sojukin was feeling right now. If not, then it was worse. She hated them for what they did. They jeopardized most aspects of her life. It sucked. It sucked alot. No not even...there had to be a word better than 'sucked' to describe this. It was horrendous, abominable, disgusting, despicable. All kinds of bad! Things Miho considered to be good! But she was a bloody hypocrite. A certain Nakabakki had been hounding her and just wouldn't leave her alone and she HATED it. Sigh. Girls in Las Noches really could get a break. Period. How on earth did the Tercera manage? Well, Kuroi always said that she was an alcoholic. Maybe she got over it by drinking? Hmm...interesting. Maybe she should try? Wait! NO! ASUKA! Why would you think of such a thing! Have you forgot about your human life?!

Yeah, Asuka didn't drink. Period. She was afraid of wine. However, it soon grew into a fear of alcohol all together. Wine was what killed her family. Well, there was a poison in it but it did kill her family. Her immediate family and other relatives. In fact, Asuka's entire family was wiped out. She didn't have a single family member living in Japan. She would if none of what happened happened. But now, Asuka was alone. Completely. No mother or father to console or hug or laugh with. No siblings to fight or play with. No aunt. No uncle. No cousin. No grandparents. No new generations. No Hitotoki's period. It was like the family altogether ceased to exist. No new generations. Asuka was alone and she knew it. It was that very feeling that turned her into a hollow. It was so strong, that she ate and ate until she finally became an arrancar. It was this way of life that forced her to create new goals. Asuka was a normal girl mean to live a normal life. Yet, here she was. In Las Noches. The Espada even found herself wishing she was a shinigami sometimes. It was a harsh life.

"It's horrible. It's the worst feeling imaginable..." She felt sullied and disgusted with herself. She didn't want it to happen, but at the time, she was outmatched in skill and strength. She retaliated, but it wasn't good enough. She constantly cursed herself for not being strong enough to fend them off.
"Well, Cain killed Makoto Escudo. He's in hell right now..,So he's gone for now I guess. The other one was Hiruma Escudo. He's a scary one. Well.....to me he was....I still hate him though. " she said, her voice trailing off. "Aha. It's okay..." she said with a half smile. This conversation got so deep so quick that one might need scuba gear to get the teal haired girl out. This was information not even her fraccion knew of. Well, Kin might if he foresaw this coming earlier...but as far as she knew he didn't release today...so maybe her secret was safe. These were Asuka's skeletons, buried deep within a huge, dark closet filled with many other skeletons and creepy things.

"It's not enough cause we always strive to better ourselves. It's the same everywhere else if ya think about it, aha. Humans want to become famous. Shinigami want to strengthen themselves so that they could protect and defend and Arrancar struggle for survival. Survival of the fittest. Aha. We could do all of that, but we're here because we couldn't let go of certain feelings we harbored. The feelings that brought us here in the first place..." she sighed. It really would be nice to see Las Noches turn into some kind of paradise. "I'll definitely grow strong! I have to be able to protect my fraccion and well..for my sake, I have to stand up for myself. I can't let anyone push me around. When I get to Sexta...Hmm..I'll stay there! I'll continue to grow though. Kind of like Kuroi. He's Segunda, but he's alot stronger than most people think because of his rank" As Asuka and Sojukin talked, a certain ravenette was listening. She leaned against the wall with arms crossed; listening in on their conversation. we let that hate build, we let it fester and consume us. We could out and murder, pillage and devastate everything around us and for what? That statement caught Miho's attention. Tch. Time to interrupt. "....And what's wrong with it? I embrace that hatred. It made me stronger. It made me grow. Such emotions and feelings should be embraced. " she said as she turned the corner, walking towards the two. She took slow, antagonizing steps. Her voice was callous and uncaring. Miho was everything dark and everything evil. Not a trace of kindness was within this girl. She used words like knives; she sliced you down and cut you to ribbons eventually reducing you to the worthless spec of dust your really were.

When Miho finally made it over to the two, she smirked and wolf walked around Asuka...who glared at her. "You? Sexta? Ahaha...You ain't gonna cut it. The Sexta we have right now is already a bitch to deal with. If I'm having trouble, what makes you think that you have even a fraction of a chance?!" she laughed. Unlike most people, Miho held zero respect for most of the Espada. Kuroi's the only she'd stick with and that was only because he was powerful. She actually wasn't loyal to him. He was aware of it. Hell, she'd TELL him to his face that she wasn't. The second he's knocked off that pedestal, Miho would take full advantage of it and take control. Evil. Dark. Malicious. No good can come from this girl; She was an abomination beyond hope of salvation. She'd turn to look at the Primera, ready to cut him to bits...but he was hot. He was also Primera. Ehhh.....maybe she shouldn't piss him off. Miho just continued to stare at the Primera, waiting for some kind of reaction.

[kensei]

First off... OH MY EYES!!! THE FONT!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!

Okay well now that I got passed the terror, lets dig into the Physical Description. I'm sorry but there is just no way that will pass. Even for academy students a picture is no substitute for a written description. For a profile of this level BS generally keeps a bare minimum of two to three full five line long paragraphs. I think you should look at some of the other Espada/Captain level characters to get a better idea of what we are looking for. For your Physical Description I would probably recommend Hana : bleachedsouls.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=acceptedcharacters&action=display&thread=635&page=1 Or for what we consider over kill... Yun.. (Who has such a small Personality in comparison ..) bleachedsouls.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=acceptedcharacters&action=display&thread=53&page=1

Now the personality fits into the minimum limits of generally about six paragraphs at the minimum. However, I found it to be rather scatter shot and I just couldn't get a clear idea of who exactly Asuka is. This isn't helped by a few contradictions such as when you say "She has reason behind ALL of her actions, always thinking before acting." and then saying "She's also a bit of an air head. Quite obviously not thinking her way through things properly."

I also feel like there is a lot missing from it as well. Like when you say she thinks different people are creatures of the night, I believe you could go into a lot more detail explaining what exactly you mean by that and how it effects her encounters with strangers. Another thing I think should be added is her current outlook on the Horror Vacui and the situation the Arrancar find themselves in currently. If you need any help with the information on them and the recent history of the Arrancar let me know and I will fill you in with the big bullet points. Your fears section is rather redundant as well seeing as you put it in the personality that she hates alcohol.

All in all I think you need to expand your personality a bit more, as well as reorganize how its written so the thought process is clearer and it isn't so random and jumping from one completely different aspect of her to another. Now a big thing to keep in mind is that no matter what, what we are really going to be looking for out of an application is quality over quantity and so long as what you have is well written and we can get a clear idea of who your character is then it will be accepted. For good examples of where high quality over rules quantity I'd suggest Hana or Grave: bleachedsouls.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=acceptedcharacters&action=display&thread=1101 and for one of the more lengthy personalities, Rin : bleachedsouls.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=acceptedcharacters&action=display&thread=1311&page=1

Hope that all helps, and I look forward to seeing the completed form of this application.